Prompt: One day
you are reading a book. One of the characters jumps out of the
book. Write a story about what happens next.
- One day I was readind a book about
Mickal Jordan It was very interesting. He was doing
slam dunks and 3 point shots it was amazing two men were garding
him he faked them out. The he went for the shot in said
to myself "how does he do it" and then to my surprise
he jumped out the picture and said "hi wat's you name"
m,m,m, my names Jason. Wona go shoot some hoops shure then
I asked him would he sign my basketball after he signed my ball
we shot 3 pointers and evan slamed it but not that hard.
Then he had to go he said he'd visit again and he asked were's
the food in the house on the shelf "thanks and good by"
he said to me.
- The next month he came back to
see me I was realy glad so was he he was sort of like my brother
but evan nicer than him. And every month or week Mickal
would come back to see me and sometimes my family and they liked
him evan better than I did. Sometimes my dad would play
basketball and at my house he gave his poster and autograph.
Score Point 2
Sample Imaginative Stories
Home Page --- Personal Narrative
Menu --- Imaginative
The response exhibits some progression of
ideas and events and provides some supporting details. However,
the supporting details do not always contribute to the narrative
("he said he'd visit again and he asked were's the food