Score
1
Prompt: One day
you are reading a book. One of the characters jumps out of the
book. Write a story about what happens next.
- One day Molly came from school and
said to herself I would like to read a nice and long book.
So she went in her room and read a long book. It was called
the three princesses while she was reading she had noticed that
the characters were moving. The next thing she noticed
is that all the characters had jumped out the book. Then
when they had came out they said my name is Nicole, Vicki, and
Angie. They said I wanted to go back and Molly said why
you just got her we want to go back because we do not belong
her. Molly said okay she opened up the book and they where
gone and Molly live happily ever after.
Score Point 1
The writer has read the prompt and attempted
to respond ("
all the characters had jumped out the
book."), but the response is incomplete and too sparse to
be scored higher than a "1."
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