Score 1

Prompt:    One day you are reading a book. One of the characters jumps out of the book. Write a story about what happens next.
 

One day Molly came from school and said to herself I would like to read a nice and long book.  So she went in her room and read a long book.  It was called the three princesses while she was reading she had noticed that the characters were moving.  The next thing she noticed is that all the characters had jumped out the book.  Then when they had came out they said my name is Nicole, Vicki, and Angie.  They said I wanted to go back and Molly said why you just got her we want to go back because we do not belong her.  Molly said okay she opened up the book and they where gone and Molly live happily ever after.


Score Point 1
The writer has read the prompt and attempted to respond ("…all the characters had jumped out the book."), but the response is incomplete and too sparse to be scored higher than a "1."

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